Hi, Davidssimpson2012!
Not bad performance, but, in my opinion, this song needs more tough and rough voice. More raw! And a bit lower timbre.
Everyone who sings material from "Core", should catch that raw, tough, heavy vibe of Scott's voice.
The effect of Scott's voice is like as if you're drinking hard drink.
Anyway, not bad performance at all, you should present this record to the band and show yourself.
Currently listening to your next cover - "Dead & Bloated".